Daybreak:Volume 3 Chapter 7 - Revision history

Aorii at 00:01, 11 August 2023

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	The Sword of Charity was a weapon of perfect defense. Its radiance reached out to cover all within forty paces, shielding every companion whom the saint cherished.		The Sword of Charity was a weapon of perfect defense. Its radiance reached out to cover all within forty paces, shielding every companion whom the saint cherished.

	But there was always a price to pay, and Edith grimaced as she felt dull pains slash across her right shoulder and back.		But there was always a price to pay, and Edith grimaced as she felt dull pains slash across her right shoulder and back. The phoenix Durandal fortified her body as it was currently merged into her. But even the sacred firebird of endurance could only mitigate part of the injury.

	''Holy Father, who art in Heaven, hallowed be thy name.'' The Saint prayed in ancient Draconic as she endured the pain of one lash after another. She drew upon the strength of her unwavering faith and the glowing warmth of her ~~merged~~ phoenix ~~Durandal~~.		''Holy Father, who art in Heaven, hallowed be thy name.'' The Saint prayed in ancient Draconic as she endured the pain of one lash after another. She drew upon the strength of her unwavering faith and the glowing warmth of her phoenix.

	Edith knew she must stand ~~straight~~ and confident in this crucial moment. With all eyes upon her, not even an iota of weakness could be tolerated.		Edith knew she must stand strong and confident in this crucial moment. With all eyes upon her, not even an iota of weakness could be tolerated.

	The tap of a crouching armiger came from Edith's legs. A pair of green eyes looked up as they questioned for authority. The armiger's gauntlets tightly grasped an iron rod that jutted out from the ground.		The tap of a crouching armiger came from Edith's legs. A pair of green eyes looked up as they questioned for authority. The armiger's gauntlets tightly grasped an iron rod that jutted out from the ground.
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	"HOLD STEADY! PIKES READY!" Lords and officers yelled all across the front.		"HOLD STEADY! PIKES READY!" Lords and officers yelled all across the front.

	The Crusader Saint stood at the forefront with her ~~steel~~ shield ready. Rows of raised pikes formed a forest of spikes as her soldiers braced against the coming tide.		The Crusader Saint stood at the forefront with her shield ready. Rows of raised pikes formed a forest of spikes as her soldiers braced against the coming tide.

	''...Lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil.''		''...Lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil.''

Aorii at 05:33, 27 January 2022

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Aorii at 21:11, 6 November 2021

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	''Holy Father, who art in Heaven, hallowed be thy name.'' The Saint prayed in ancient Draconic as she endured the pain of one lash after another. She drew upon the strength of her unwavering faith and the glowing warmth of her merged phoenix Durandal.		''Holy Father, who art in Heaven, hallowed be thy name.'' The Saint prayed in ancient Draconic as she endured the pain of one lash after another. She drew upon the strength of her unwavering faith and the glowing warmth of her merged phoenix Durandal.

	Edith knew she must stand straight and confident in this crucial moment. With all eyes upon her, not even an iota of weakness could ~~not~~ be tolerated.		Edith knew she must stand straight and confident in this crucial moment. With all eyes upon her, not even an iota of weakness could be tolerated.

	The tap of a crouching armiger came from Edith's legs. A pair of green eyes looked up as they questioned for authority. The armiger's gauntlets tightly grasped an iron rod that jutted out from the ground.		The tap of a crouching armiger came from Edith's legs. A pair of green eyes looked up as they questioned for authority. The armiger's gauntlets tightly grasped an iron rod that jutted out from the ground.

Aorii at 16:02, 3 July 2021

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Aorii: REDUX STARTS, FULL CLEAR

2021-07-03T16:02:20Z

REDUX STARTS, FULL CLEAR

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Aorii at 13:48, 6 April 2017

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Aorii at 19:01, 28 July 2016

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Aorii: Created page with "===Chapter 7 - The Polar Cross=== Kaede stared in awe at the dense patch of fog that engulfed the center of the stone circle. Even among the mist that clouded their surroundi..."

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Created page with "===Chapter 7 - The Polar Cross=== Kaede stared in awe at the dense patch of fog that engulfed the center of the stone circle. Even among the mist that clouded their surroundi..."

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