Daybreak:Volume 3 Chapter 14 - Revision history

Aorii at 21:13, 28 January 2022

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	"So you have said," Lionel brushed aside what he clearly saw as a feeble excuse. "But we're fleeing west into the forests now, aren't we? How can we come to the city's aid if it's assaulted tomorrow!?"		"So you have said," Lionel brushed aside what he clearly saw as a feeble excuse. "But we're fleeing west into the forests now, aren't we? How can we come to the city's aid if it's assaulted tomorrow!?"

	"We have no choice but to head west!" Pascal pointed at the map table, where a broad arrow marked the movement of the Caliphate army detachment that crossed the Hafren earlier today in pursuit. "We have no fortification built along the Hafren and our forces are too depleted to challenge a forced river crossing. Furthermore, the infidels are throwing most of their remaining cavalry after us -- over fifteen thousand professional troops! Not to mention those reinforcements from the sea who could land behind us to cut the road if we stay here. With less than five thousand men at our disposal, we cannot face such numbers and win!"		"We have no choice but to head west!" Pascal pointed at the map table, where a broad arrow marked the movement of the Caliphate army detachment that crossed the Hafren earlier today in pursuit. "We have no fortification built along the Hafren's western banks, and our forces are too depleted to challenge a forced river crossing. Furthermore, the infidels are throwing most of their remaining cavalry after us -- over fifteen thousand professional troops! Not to mention those reinforcements from the sea who could land behind us to cut the road if we stay here. With less than five thousand men at our disposal, we cannot face such numbers and win!"

	"With an attitude like that, of course you cannot!" Lionel slammed back as he stabbed his gloved finger against Pascal's chest. "Who was it that boasted he was sent by the Holy Father to bring us victory!? Now you propose we abandon Roazhon behind us without any chance of relief!? We must at least ''try'' to harry the enemy! Otherwise when their reinforcements arrive, there is nothing stopping them from taking the city by force!"		"With an attitude like that, of course you cannot!" Lionel slammed back as he stabbed his gloved finger against Pascal's chest. "Who was it that boasted he was sent by the Holy Father to bring us victory!? Now you propose we abandon Roazhon behind us without any chance of relief!? We must at least ''try'' to harry the enemy! Otherwise when their reinforcements arrive, there is nothing stopping them from taking the city by force!"
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	Kaede could feel the jerk of tears in her eyes. She was trapped inside a room which looked and felt exactly like home, yet wasn't. It was as though someone was purposefully toying with her thoughts, her emotions, her homesick nostalgia.		Kaede could feel the jerk of tears in her eyes. She was trapped inside a room which looked and felt exactly like home, yet wasn't. It was as though someone was purposefully toying with her thoughts, her emotions, her homesick nostalgia.

	"<Kaede? You are awake?>" A voice she had grown all too familiar with over the past ~~two~~ months spoke.		"<Kaede? You are awake?>" A voice she had grown all too familiar with over the past few months spoke.

	"<Pascal!? Where are you!? ''Where am I!?'' What did you do to me!?>"		"<Pascal!? Where are you!? ''Where am I!?'' What did you do to me!?>"
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	"<Calm down, Kaede.>" He winced. "<You are in a familiar pocket. I will let you out in a moment.>"		"<Calm down, Kaede.>" He winced. "<You are in a familiar pocket. I will let you out in a moment.>"

	''A familiar pocket...'' Kaede thought as she remembered the extradimensional belt pouch that Perceval's Tofu ~~slid out of~~.		''A familiar pocket...'' Kaede thought as she remembered the extradimensional belt pouch that Perceval's Tofu climbed into.

	"<You ''stuffed'' me into a pokeball!?>" Her strung out emotions began to overheat at once.		"<You ''stuffed'' me into a pokeball!?>" Her strung out emotions began to overheat at once.

Aorii: fixing problems with that one scene

2021-12-15T17:48:11Z

fixing problems with that one scene

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	"Come on. We should grab you some dinner while warm soup is still available. You have not eaten in over two days."		"Come on. We should grab you some dinner while warm soup is still available. You have not eaten in over two days."

	Kaede reached out with her still numb right arm without thinking. Hot pain seared through her ligaments the moment Pascal pulled, which prompted a stream of "Owowow" to rush out of her lips. Her sudden cries threw even Pascal off balance. And her pain-stiffened grip ended up pulling him ~~on top of her~~ as she collapsed back into bed.		Kaede reached out with her still numb right arm without thinking. Hot pain seared through her ligaments the moment Pascal pulled, which prompted a stream of "Owowow" to rush out of her lips. Her sudden cries threw even Pascal off balance. And her pain-stiffened grip ended up pulling him in as she collapsed back into bed.

	~~The familiar felt her master~~'s ~~breath tickling her cheeks~~. ~~Pascal's thumb brushed~~ her side and his knee ~~could be felt~~ between her thighs. ~~Her cheeks instantly flushed several shades of scarlet~~ as she ~~realized~~ the ~~precarious position she winded up in~~.		Pascal's quick reflexes managed to brace himself against the bedcovers before he could fall into Kaede. Instead, he had ended up with one hand at her side and his knee supporting himself between her thighs. Nevertheless, the young lord now leaned over his familiar as she lay atop the bed.

	Yet before she could tell him to get up, the door barged open to the darkening forest outside.		The Samaran girl's cheeks instantly flushed several shades of scarlet as she realized her precarious position. She still wasn't dressed properly and his face was far too close for comfort! Yet, before she could tell him to get up, the door barged open to the darkening forest outside.

	"Pascal! Are you alright? Lord Rivers said you had an acci..."		"Pascal! Are you alright? Lord Rivers said you had an acci..."

	The Princess immediately froze as she registered her disheveled fiancé, who ~~laid on the bed atop~~ a blushing and shocked Kaede. The Samaran girl wore only a set of undergarments that looked like bridal lingerie. Meanwhile his inflamed, swollen cheeks looked as though he had just been slapped.		The Princess immediately froze as she registered her disheveled fiancé, who had a blushing and shocked Kaede pinned between himself and the bed. The Samaran girl wore only a set of undergarments that looked like bridal lingerie. Meanwhile his inflamed, swollen cheeks looked as though he had just been slapped.

	Sylviane's eyes narrowed at once as her voice fell to a threatening tone:		Sylviane's eyes narrowed at once as her voice fell to a threatening tone:

Aorii at 17:17, 8 December 2021

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Aorii at 21:17, 6 November 2021

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Aorii: REDUX STARTS, FULL CLEAR

2021-10-29T14:37:08Z

REDUX STARTS, FULL CLEAR

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Aorii at 14:24, 6 April 2017

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Aorii at 15:06, 8 December 2016

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	"So you have said," Lionel brushed aside what he clearly saw as a feeble excuse. "But we are fleeing west into the forests now, are we not? How can we come to the city's aid if it is assaulted tomorrow!?"		"So you have said," Lionel brushed aside what he clearly saw as a feeble excuse. "But we are fleeing west into the forests now, are we not? How can we come to the city's aid if it is assaulted tomorrow!?"

	"We have no choice but to head west!" Pascal pointed at the map table, where a broad arrow marked the movement of the Caliphate army detachment that crossed the Hafren earlier today in pursuit. "The infidels are throwing most of their Ghulam cavalry and compound archers after us -- fifteen thousand professional troops! With less than five thousand men at our disposal, we cannot face ~~that army~~ and win...!"		"We have no choice but to head west!" Pascal pointed at the map table, where a broad arrow marked the movement of the Caliphate army detachment that crossed the Hafren earlier today in pursuit. "The infidels are throwing most of their Ghulam cavalry and compound archers after us -- fifteen thousand professional troops! Not to mention the reinforcements they're anticipating from the sea who could land behind us to cut the road if we stay here. With less than five thousand men at our disposal, we cannot face such numbers and win...!"

	"With an attitude like that, of course you cannot!" Lionel slammed back with gloved fingers pointing. "Who was it that boasted he was sent by the Holy Father to bring us victory!? Now you propose we abandon Roazhon behind us without any chance of relief!? We have to at least try to harry the enemy!"		"With an attitude like that, of course you cannot!" Lionel slammed back with gloved fingers pointing. "Who was it that boasted he was sent by the Holy Father to bring us victory!? Now you propose we abandon Roazhon behind us without any chance of relief!? We have to at least try to harry the enemy! Otherwise when their reinforcements arrive, there is nothing stopping them from taking the city by force!"

	"It is blasphemy, to claim guidance from the Holy Father yet act in contradiction to Trinitian teachings," Lady Anne added from the other side of the room, attending in place of Lady Estelle who was leading a night ambush with several rear-guard companies.		"It is blasphemy, to claim guidance from the Holy Father yet act in contradiction to Trinitian teachings," Lady Anne added from the other side of the room, attending in place of Lady Estelle who was leading a night ambush with several rear-guard companies.
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	"I mean," Pascal fumbled for words. "We simply fell over! ''Nothing'' happened!"		"I mean," Pascal fumbled for words. "We simply fell over! ''Nothing'' happened!"

	Sylviane looked to Kaede for confirmation, and the familiar girl, finally realizing ~~what was going on~~, nodded fervently before her master could be turned into meat paste.		Sylviane looked to Kaede for confirmation, and the familiar girl, finally realizing that she wouldn't be blamed for 'tempting' him, nodded fervently before her master could be turned into meat paste.

	~~At least, in this world, she would not be the one blamed for 'tempting' him~~.

Aorii: Created page with "===Chapter 14 - Desperate Authority=== "Are you serious?" "Yes." Pascal nodded as he faced the stern gazes of Colonel von Mackensen and his two sub-commanders in the middle ..."

2016-10-20T19:06:10Z

Created page with "===Chapter 14 - Desperate Authority=== "Are you serious?" "Yes." Pascal nodded as he faced the stern gazes of Colonel von Mackensen and his two sub-commanders in the middle ..."

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